Critique my poem!

I’ve really only dabbled in poetry (and never outside of my diary), so this is the first time I’ve ever shared it.

I’m hoping to get some actual criticism on it :)

If you take a moment to read through this short poem, I wanna say thank you first, of course.

But I would also deeply appreciate it if you left a comment with your thoughts about it

(Negative thoughts are ofc welcome because that’s how we improve our craft!)

#poetry #poem #creativewriting